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Reviewer: Supreme Ruler Signed  [ Report This]
Date: May 17, 2005 5:03 PM
Title: Extraction
I have been meaning to read this, and now I have finally read at least the first chapter.. Anyways, I loved the vocabulary you used. It was very well writen, I didn't find any spelling mistakes, so that's good. I look forward to reading the next chapters! Keep up the amazing work!!
Author's Response: Thanks alot, I its nice to hear appreciation for my vocabulary, its not the best or anything, but I suppose it must be something! Hah, funny you mentioned the spelling issue, scroll down about half way and you should find a review stating the exact opposite, a fine example of why one should not rush themselves! Haha, thanks again for the read and review!
Reviewer: Total Darkness Signed  [ Report This]
Date: Apr 02, 2005 11:35 PM
Title: Assassin?
W00t!! Yet another brilliant chapter! ^__^ I recently got home from being in a 3 hour concert, so I'm drained, but I wanted to stop by and say that this was an awesome chapter. Bravo again! ^^ And I think I'm gonna hire my sister as my Typer, so I don't have to type and I just edit it. XD She wants to read the chapters so bad, she can type them for me too! ^__^
Author's Response: Well, I'm touched to hear of your integrity, there's no need to kill yourself to pop in a review! And are you rewriting all my chapters? Cause you could just copy and paste the text from the emails. It could save both you and your sister some time, or are you talking about getting her to type your own stuff too? Ha ha, what are siblings for! Anyways, thanks for the review!
Reviewer: Atchika Signed [ Report This]
Date: Apr 02, 2005 11:35 PM
Title: Assassin?
Ack - Well Impa will do what she has to to prove a point eh? Thank you for editing this. Was a good chapter.
Author's Response: Hmmm... I think you're too smart. That actually isn't the idea I had in mind, though it almost completely works! Funny, I wrote a chapter with two complete variables. I don't know weither that's good or not... anyways, thanks for your revoew, and reading so well that you can notice things even I didn't! Bravo! Ha ha! And yeah, thank TD also for the editting, sorry about the other time.
Reviewer: Total Darkness Signed [ Report This]
Date: Mar 26, 2005 9:46 AM
Title: Soulmates?
Heehee....lots of work for the Editor. ^_^ But hey, I actually love getting a lot work with editting. I get happy for some reason. >>;; But anyway, the story is taking a small twist, huh? ^_^ Story twists are fun! *counts on fingers how many plot twists there are in Approaching Darkness*
Author's Response: Yeah, I was in a nervous mood, I only write when no one is around, so I never got around to sending it to you before I posted it, oh well, I got your editing copy now, I'll go switch it ASAP, sorry to anyone who was exposed to such descretional grammer and spelling. Once again, thats for reading, editing, and reveiwing!
Author's Response: There we go, thanks again! ^_^
Reviewer: Total Darkness Signed [ Report This]
Date: Mar 26, 2005 9:43 AM
Title: Body and Mind
I thought this one ran pretty deep. Wow. I was amazed when I read it while fixing it. I was stunned, believe it or not. As simple as it actually is, I love it. And well, in respnse to one of your reviews to my stories on ff.net, no . . . I don't write with my eyes shut. How could I write? ^_^ How you put that one thing in chapter 2, how you worded it, made me queezy. My work doesn't quite do that to me. . . . but just that one sentence of yours....
Author's Response: Thanks, I'm intriged apon te whole idea of subcconcious turmoils, so I decided to try to exploit it a bit here, glad to hear it seemed to turn out. And yeah, the whole eyes closed thing came from a book "THe Groovy Greeks", which was a history one, but had some PG graphicness in it so it advised the reader to read the story with their eyes shut it one suffers from nightmeres. Ha ha, thanks for the reveiw!
Reviewer: Total Darkness Signed [ Report This]
Date: Mar 26, 2005 9:40 AM
Title: Contempted Contentment
Don't I get a few points with that diaogue? I did edit it. X3 Regardless, you are a good writer. You just need some more practice and that's about it. I'm enjoying your story a lot, and I get to red it when I edit it. ^__^ Which is a very fun job. TO ALL OF YOU WHO DON'T KNOW, I'M HYPERLINK'S EDITOR!! ^__^ Why am I so hyper this early in the morning? o.o
Author's Response: Don't worry, I never forget the help you've been giving, so all the people who didn't notice your review... TOTAL DARKNESS IS MY EDITOR, ALL HAIL TD!
As for the hyperness, I dunno, maybe lay off cofee or other cafene substances if you take any in the morning, if not, maybe you need to exercise more. ANyway, thats for the help and reading!
Reviewer: Atchika Anonymous [ Report This]
Date: Mar 23, 2005 8:35 PM
Title: Soulmates?
Oh my...Did you forget how to spell??? Way too many spelling errors in that. But I like anything with random fairies. Hope to see more soon :P
Author's Response: Haha, yeah, I was in a real blur of a moment, usually I transfer it to a word file to edit, then send it off to another to get it reedited, but I was so proud of simply spontaniously writing some chapters I just posted them without even looking them overe. Don't worry, I cant touch type and Im clumsy, so I make lots of typing errors. No fear, it shall be editted soon enough. Thanks for remeinding me, and reading the chapter.!
Author's Response: Argh, that was horibble, I just went over it myself in the edit bit and found about fifty thousand, oh well, maybe I'll remember for next time. ^_^
Reviewer: Atchika Anonymous [ Report This]
Date: Mar 23, 2005 8:29 PM
Title: Contempted Contentment
Oh I liked this chapter. I'm glad you found time to work on this. The Deku and Saria's dialogue was very well done. Go you.
Author's Response: Yeah thanks, I finally got this one in after a long drougt of time, I decided that an emphasise on Link's ailment was in need, now and for future events. Plus, its nessessary for certain occurances. I liked the chapter too, it ws a nice change from my usual stuff. Anyways, thanks for reading and reveiwing!
Reviewer: Total Darkness Signed [ Report This]
Date: Mar 02, 2005 10:11 PM
Title: Tremors and Shadow
Dang. Morbid ending. I'm violent with my writing, but....*rambles* My stomach turned over and twisted up. ^^;; No idea why it did that...but heh. This was different, I liked it, though it was hard to follow. If you do want me to help edit your stories, drop me a note sometime. ^^ ~TD
Author's Response: Yeah, don't worry, I was kind of affected with similar symptoms when I wrote it, I guess it's that sort of story. And its not finished, I have more in plan for it. Atleast it's living up to it's R rating then. And yeah, if you don't mind I'll send you some emails containing the files, even plain writing advice would be aprreciated. I like reasding and would like to write more, but I never get around to it, so I dont have much experience. An my english teachers have all been complete dolts, I never did any stories last year and before that my writing hadnt needed improvement from my grade 6 level to get A's, high ones at that. Anyways, thanks for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: Total Darkness Signed [ Report This]
Date: Mar 01, 2005 10:29 PM
Title: Extraction
Interesting story. The only problems I see with it are the squished together paragraphs and some spelling errors, not including the Reptalfo. And I think they're called "Lizalfos", not "Reptalfo". "Lizalfo"s is the same for both single and pural. Apart from this, the story is taking an interesting twist on things. ^^ I like it. Just be sure to sort of clean up the chapters before you post them. *thinks about getting self an editor* I need one of those editor people. X3 Anyhow, I'll will read the next chapter later, but not tonight. It's getting late. Later. =^^= ~TD
Author's Response: Don't worry, I know what I'm doing, Reptalfos is the generalized term for Lizalfos and Dinalfols, both of them are included, and I consider them of different species, although very closely related. And yeah, for the begining I'm trying to make it seem a bit vague, I dont what to much revealed yet. I seem to not be doing to good of job on it then? And yeah, if you'd been interested in editing my story, I'd be cool with that. Its a kind of job you need a third perspective to. And yeah, It probubly is a bit squishy, I never get much time to work on them, so its all rat race when I do. Anywyas, thanks very much for taking time to read and review my story!
Reviewer: Atchika Signed [ Report This]
Date: Feb 26, 2005 9:53 PM
Title: Tremors and Shadow
Any plans on finishing this? Would be a damn shame if you didn't.
Author's Response: Gahhh, you actually reviewed this story! Man, there has been such a serious drought on that, you've probubly been the first to read it to in months! And you really do like it? I was wondering if it was a bit off key or something... anyways, worry not; I have many plans on finishing it, it's just I can never find much time to work on it. I prefere that no one knows I write fanfiction, so I pretty much can only write when no one is around, and when that does come, I'm usually not in the mood. Well, anyways, thanks greatly for the review, and I will try double hard to find time this weekend, and if I don't bug me some more or something. In the mean time, feel free to check the other story I'm writing on Zeldapower.com, its knid if the smae, and still in the begining. Anyways, to cut my rambling short, again I greatly thank you for taking time to read and review my story!!!!
Reviewer: MIsta Sinista Signed [ Report This]
Date: Nov 13, 2004 4:53 PM
Title: Tremors and Shadow
Lol, I almost cried when I read Link weep like that, so sad. I guess you can tell by his reaction that he really cares for his loved ones to go to the extent of hysterically crying. Anyway, the description continues to get better through time, like the battle. The captain died a gruesome death, now I know why this is rated R. Keep up the good work!
Author's Response: Thanks man, its good to know I can put emotion into my writing as well. And for the fighting (especially for those who find that the highlight of stories) it certainly going to get intense, even more then this one! Anyway, thanks for the review, and keep up the good work on your story!
Reviewer: Delphink Anonymous [ Report This]
Date: Nov 08, 2004 5:52 PM
Title: Extraction
Hey, interesting story man. Nice sort of foreshadowing too. And the whole thing about the trifoce is a different sort of idea... oh well, good job so far, I think its going to just get better from here. *_*
Author's Response: Thanks man, its nice to see another fan. This first chapter was nessesary only to lowerthe power of the triforce and stuff, other wise it would of been only a prologue with the second bit. The next chapters should be alot more eventful and interesting. Thanks again for the review!
Reviewer: MIsta Sinista Signed [ Report This]
Date: Nov 08, 2004 1:27 PM
Title: Extraction
Hey Chad, you probably already know what I am going to say, because that e-mail I sent you was kind of the review, lol. But anyway, let's make this story look well-liked. There is no doubt about it: You have some ability to beautifully fit words together to make a really good sentence, and more of that--most of the vocabulary you've used, to me, is amazing. ^_^ Lol, oh by the way, did you change Ignatius's name to Valin? Or did you just change the character? I'm looking forward to the next chapter! Lol. Funny Link.
Author's Response: Hey, what are you doing reading an R rated story? Just kidding(and with everyone else too.) But seriuosly, this story will probubly evolve so much that if it ws a movie, I wouldn't be able to see it on screen. Ha ha. Anyway, thanks very much for your support and complements, I really do appriciate them from all people. Oh, and Ignatius did get split into two people. (my original idea was to have two.) Thanks for the review!
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